fucking sucks
this is crap, and i wish i never gave you view that i did. is this even historically accurate? or were you just going for horribly done violence?
and a few other points:
-most dead people fall over. you seem to have that backwards, whereas, in here, most of them remain standing, and SOM fall over.
-the artwork seemed half-assed, save the one scene with the sniper rifle. did someone else do that for you? the style seems immensely different from the rest of the flash.
-the soldiers retreat to the right. if you knew anything of screenplay, people read left to right. so visually speaking, they are "advancing".