i was thoroughly disappointed.
this is crap, and i wish i never gave you view that i did. is this even historically accurate? or were you just going for horribly done violence?
and a few other points:
-most dead people fall over. you seem to have that backwards, whereas, in here, most of them remain standing, and SOM fall over.
-the artwork seemed half-assed, save the one scene with the sniper rifle. did someone else do that for you? the style seems immensely different from the rest of the flash.
-the soldiers retreat to the right. if you knew anything of screenplay, people read left to right. so visually speaking, they are "advancing".
It doesn't need to be physically nor historically accurate. After all, it is just a cartoon. I wouldn't know about screenplay since I am not a professional cartoon maker. I don't know what you mean by advancing, because they are retreating.
i was amazed at the quality. but disappointed about the short length. keep these coming!
the only thing preventing it from getting a perfect score was the fact that you used that accursed squeaky opening door from AIM.
other than that: simply beautiful.
it was a bit too slwo for me. not bad though
it had its bad points, and its... bad points...
okay. so i congratulate you on your working button. good job. you did say this was a test, so i'm not going to get too critical here.
i'm already sure you know the obvious points:
it's not much on content
drawings could've been better
some animating could've been smoother (i.e. when he first begins to fall. check that out, and fix the jumpy part)
and the good stuff:
the button works obviously
the music was a good choice
i like the way he hit. it didn't actually show it, but it not-showed it in a good way. i like the style of that scene
keep it up. in future submissions, add more class, and more content. you know you can do it.
spelled "meenwhile" incorrectly. properly spelled, it's "meanwhile". other than that, i'll not comment.
the photo quality and the movements were actually REALLY good! thius wasn't too much on storyline or anything, but not too bad.
less points for sound and dialogue as well.
hey i remember this...
you showed me this before you finished it! dude, you've gotten much better since you submitted this, i think you should re-do it. it's a great song, and i think you can do more body movement, and make an actually music video.
use a new mouth chart though lol. some of those seem odd....
i dont want to redo it though
and i was gona add more but i lost interest
that mouth chart was awesome and you know it. especially when it used to have women lips in it... hehe
and im gona do a music video for a different song
just havent figured out what song to do...
this is definately a masterpiece. i love the eerie feeling you've created. and the way it was pulled off... excellent... you see, i'm truly amazed because you didn't use dark, gloomy, horror movie colors to make it so eerie.
there's no dark and black "oh my god i can't see anything, what's going on, i'm scared" scenes, no red "blood stained, hatchetman, crazy psycho-ness" either. yet both of these thoughts went through my head while watching.
your choice of elements, characters, loads and loads of "what the fuck??!!" were excellent... congratulations!!
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